During my summer break from the "One Potato...Ten" blog, my writing has focused on something new for me--screenwriting--and I love it! I'm drawing near the end of an enrichment semester in Film Adaptation/Screenwriting through the Spalding University MFA program. My faculty mentor is screenwriter/ playwright Charlie Schulman, and I have to say I've learned more in this semester than any other. I started from scratch (no experience whatsoever), and I feel as if I now have a decent first draft of a film adaptation of my middle grade novel, ROAD TO TATER Hill. I still have time for another revision before the semester is up. I have a feeling I'll be doing a lot of slashing.
Here are a few tips I learned:
1. Think visually.
2. Avoid description and introspection.
3. Dialogue is secondary.
4. Show, don't tell.
5. Less is better.
6. Keep a metronome beating in my head as I write.
7. Be open to adding some new scenes that help tell the story more visually.
8. Be open to removing some scenes from the book that won't work in a film.
I did find some time for reading and started with some screenplays, three by Horton Foote: TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD, THE TRIP TO BOUNTIFUL, and TENDER MERCIES.
Books I highly recommend are:
LEAVING GEE'S BEND by Irene Latham
THE GARDENER by our own Stephanie Stuve-Bodeen
EYES ON THE GOAL by our own John Coy
FAITHFUL by Janet Fox
COMFORT by Joyce Moyer Hostetter
THE YEAR OF GOODBYES by Debbie Levy
Ten writers for children. All with something to say.
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I love that you can write your own screenplay. Thanks for the list of screenwriting tips and more titles to add to my reading list.
Thanks, Christy! I just went back and added a couple more tips that came to mind. It's nice to be able to edit the post.
Bravo to you, Edie, for tackling a new genre. And what a great way to extend the reach of your book. Many of your screenwriting tips could be applied to good writing in general. Several of them reminded me of things I heard Sid Fleischman say, who was a very successful screenwriter before he began writing for young people.
I would definitely like to try that at some point:)
What a rich and productive summer you had Edie! Thanks for the writing tips. I agree with David-- these same tips ring true for all writing. And your book recommendations will be added to my reading list!
Thanks, David, Stephanie, and Lauren! Yes, the more I look at these tips, the more I realize I can apply these to all my writing. I've just been told I need to cut 30 pages from my latest draft of the screenplay, so back to work...
Great to get an update from you, Edie. Sounds like you had a fun and productive summer. Thanks for the writing and reading tips, and good luck on your script revision(s)!!
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