I've been very good at not peeking. But since I'm done with my part, I couldn't help but look at the other last lines. I took a definite left turn... My last sentence:
Just as the monster struck, the boy wrapped both arms around the snake and pushed off, smiling as they soared over the side because he'd guaranteed the enemy would never hurt his family again.
2 comments:
Stephanie, This is a very satisfying story end, though I can't imagine yet how it connects to my beginning.
I'm pleased with the ending too. It leaves room for a sequel! :)
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