Christy's last sentence was pretty provocative! It took me a while to puzzle over what to do with it, but eventually I came up with a short scene that ends with this sentence:
He lowered himself onto a milking stool and added, "She should have never taken up with that salesmen from Kentucky."
Good luck, Carmen!
This is hysterical! You definitely took the story in an unimagined direction.
ReplyDeleteThis is fun . . .and . . . the story unfolds. I missed my day to post my alternative-life and I don't know how; time-travel?
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