tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-339010711047634783.post4831028421650939766..comments2024-03-14T00:19:45.060-07:00Comments on One Potato...Ten!: Captain Sam and Eddie (a writing exercise)Stephaniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05385380660178435154noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-339010711047634783.post-11017355355625573082011-04-12T14:16:51.921-07:002011-04-12T14:16:51.921-07:00I want to hear more too. Beautiful writing.I want to hear more too. Beautiful writing.Diane Adamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08314603829439839092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-339010711047634783.post-17677037578134555282011-04-10T04:50:10.187-07:002011-04-10T04:50:10.187-07:00Not the Maine story, Christy, but this start is gi...Not the Maine story, Christy, but this start is giving me a good feeling for another story, set on the Chesapeake Bay.Edie Hemingwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17496477219035860857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-339010711047634783.post-30291882751000804432011-04-09T07:53:03.966-07:002011-04-09T07:53:03.966-07:00Edie, will something like this be part of your Mai...Edie, will something like this be part of your Maine story? A wonderful sense of setting has come through. I want more!Christyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09408845654668250300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-339010711047634783.post-58132174596676296312011-04-08T13:58:57.923-07:002011-04-08T13:58:57.923-07:00Thanks, David! Now I want to take the story farth...Thanks, David! Now I want to take the story farther...Edie Hemingwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17496477219035860857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-339010711047634783.post-6802394443152965472011-04-08T13:51:21.881-07:002011-04-08T13:51:21.881-07:00Very evocative, Edie! Wow. You sure said a lot in ...Very evocative, Edie! Wow. You sure said a lot in just a few sentences. The setting is already clear, and I strongly felt Eddie's anxiety. Bravo!David LaRochellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09146141298496287697noreply@blogger.com